I really enjoyed this - very emotional and great descriptive wording. Even though it's a short piece I could really feel Kate's rising frustration and panic, and I like how you used the running to get it across. You also conveyed Clint's surprise / shock / utter confusion beautifully.
I have to admit, though, I totally burst out laughing at the image of Lucky putting on the brakes and Kate doing a faceplant. That was pretty priceless. ^.^
Thank you for sharing! (And I totally realized that our quick fics share the exact same word count, CREEPY)
Also totally wanting to friends you if that's okay / cool / not stalkerish?
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Date: 2013-07-14 08:10 pm (UTC)From:I have to admit, though, I totally burst out laughing at the image of Lucky putting on the brakes and Kate doing a faceplant. That was pretty priceless. ^.^
Thank you for sharing! (And I totally realized that our quick fics share the exact same word count, CREEPY)
Also totally wanting to friends you if that's okay / cool / not stalkerish?