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It is time to change my POV again. This story that is my life is headed in the wrong direction. The characters are messed up. The plot is in serious need of help.
When a character has a gnawing ache in her stomach, that means that drama is coming but this is supposed to be a dramaless story. We need more action-adventure and less drama.
Good to know. I'm glad I caught it before the story got ruined.
When a character has a gnawing ache in her stomach, that means that drama is coming but this is supposed to be a dramaless story. We need more action-adventure and less drama.
Good to know. I'm glad I caught it before the story got ruined.
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Date: 2011-02-26 01:56 am (UTC)From:no subject
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